15年考研英语大作文范文

Part B

52. Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200

words based on the following drawing. In your essay you should 1) describe the drawing briefly 2) explain its intended meaning, and

3) give your comments You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

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1. 推导图画寓意

手机的出现给生活带来了巨大的变化，对人际交往的负面作用逐渐呈现，如何抵制这样的影响是现代人需要关注的问题。 2. 罗列关键词

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table n.餐桌 dish n.菜 seat v.坐 play with phones玩手机 smart phone 智能手机

face-to-face communication面对面交流

contact in real life真实生活中的交流

3. 优秀范文赏析

手机时代的聚会

【参考范文】

Four friends get together to have a dinner. What’s weird is that the four appear to be stranger to

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each other, not talking with friends seated beside but totally indulging in smart phones.

The picture reveals a typical scene for modern people. Whenever people have a chance to relax, they will fish out phones to play for a while.

The

warm

face-to-face

communication which was taken for granted has been violently ruined by smart phones and becomes a luxury. It is challenging or even impossible for

many

people on

to

keep

concentration

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face-to-face

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communication. As the quality of emotional

interaction

between

people suffer an annoying dramatic deterioration, more and more people arrive at an approval that people should shut down mobile phones when being with friends or relatives. Unfortunately, it is only a theoretical opinion. Few people apply it.

The smart phone is really the most controversial modern invention, bringing enjoyable relaxation and great convenience on one hand and causing problematic phone addiction

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and consequent interpersonal

isolation on the other hand. Rational attitude should be paid to the mobile phone. We should not squander on a lifeless machine the limited and precious time with friends and relatives. Due importance should be attached to the contact in real life.

批判词汇：weird， indulge in, be violently ruined by, impossible, suffer

an

annoying

dramatic

deterioration,

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unfortunately, controversial,

problematic addiction, interpersonal isolation, squander time on ..., take a rational attitude to, hold a rational attitude toward, attach due importance to sth. [精彩句式]

1. What’s weird is that the four appear to be stranger to each other, not talking with friends seated beside but totally indulging in smart phones.

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句子成形步骤： 1）写出简单句

The four seem not to know about each other.

They don’t talk with others. They only play with smart phones. It is weird. 2) 整合简单句

It is weird that the four seem not to know about each other, because they don’t talk with others and only play with smart phones.

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3) 增加表达精确性和美感

What’s weird is that the four appear to be stranger to each other, not talking with friends seated beside but totally indulging in smart phones. 2. As the quality of emotional interaction between people suffer an annoying dramatic deterioration, more and more people arrive at an approval that people should shut down mobile phones when being with friends or relatives. 句子成形步骤：

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1）The quality of communication declines.

People are with friends or relatives. People should shut down mobile phones.

More and more people agree about it.

2) 整合简单句

As the quality of communication declines, more and more people agree that people should shut down mobile phones when they are with friends or relatives.

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3) 增加表达精确性和美感 As

the

quality

of

emotional

interaction between people suffer an annoying dramatic deterioration, more and more people arrive at an approval that people should shut down mobile phones when being with friends or relatives.

3. The smart phone is really the most controversial

modern

invention,

bringing enjoyable relaxation and great convenience on one hand and causing problematic phone addiction

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and consequent interpersonal

isolation on the other hand. 句子成形步骤： 1）写出简单句

The smart phone is controversial. The smart phone can make people relaxed. The

smart

phone

brings

convenience.

The smart phone will make people addict to the phone.

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The addiction to the phone causes interpersonal isolation. 2) 整合简单句

The smart phone is controversial, which can make people relaxed, bring convenience but will make people addict to the phone, which causes interpersonal isolation. 3) 增加表达精确性和美感

The smart phone is really the most controversial

modern

invention,

bringing enjoyable relaxation and great convenience on one hand and

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causing problematic phone addiction and

consequent

interpersonal

isolation on the other hand. consequent adj.随之发生的；作为结果的必然的 抵挡作文进阶演练

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playing friends 1716with family members. or The mobile phone is 1817families. This is really the a high double-edged technology can sword. On one be a double hand, 1819it brings sword. On one great convenience hand, it give to life and work, great 19but on the other it 20convenient for hand, makes life and work, people distant from but on the other each other. hand, it get people further Word资料

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and away. 20further I think it I think we should best if we use use our phones our proper wise. screen 631122phone properly and wisely. 443and What is What displayed on the disply screen can never 556never replace replace the warm the feel among communication human.

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Unfolded in the elaborately

cartoon

is scene:

a four

painted

thought-provoking

youngsters are sitting together to have their gathering feast. However,

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much of their attention has been attached to their mobile cell phones, totally forgetting what they are gathering for. Just as is put in the caption of this cartoon, it is typically a“Dinner party in mobile era.”

This picture is naturally

associated with a wide-spreading phenomenon

in

contemporary

society—too much addiction to the mobile phones. Indeed, we have all stepped into an era of getting and staying in touch with others through telecommunication. Each of us seems

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close to another under this

circumstance, but we have to look at the side-effect of the technology: the high-tech electronic products also cut

off

the

face-to-face

communication. To be specific, in our daily life, it’s not uncommon that on buses or subways, or walking on the road, we are all playing with phones or pads for recreation, such as reading novels, watching videos or movies, surfing the Internet, and so on, even though we travel with our friends, parents or loved one.

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Evidently, we should take a rational attitude towards this issue, but how? The media should promote the awareness o f healthy lifestyle among the public, especially the young. Meanwhile, social activities, either

in

communities

or

on

campuses, should be launched so that people can get back to the real world.

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